Good to see you are back again with some better recordings
As for multiple attachments, please refer to my posting about this on
http://server3.pianosociety.com/new/php ... .php?t=900
The Chopin 30-4 is a lot
better. The piano sounds much nicer and the sloppyness is gone. If it wasn't so impatient (still) this would be rather good. You seem unwilling to take your time and apply some rubato and dynamics. The tempo is also too fast for a Waltz maked 'Lento'.
Some apparent reading mistakes that need attention:
- You leave out the upper voice in bar 8 and similar.
- You play an extra f in the LH in bar 63 and similar bars.
- You play an extra LH chord in bar 100 and similar bars.
The E Major section (bars 177-188) is beautifully done, as if the sun suddenly breaks through. If only you'd apply that same sensitivity to the entire waltz, it would make all the difference !
The Op.70-2 is not quite as good yet. You should really listen back with the score, as there are a significant number of reading mistakes, as well as some slips (no horrible ones though). And you should do more with dynamics - there is hardly a contrast between piano and forte.
The Bach Echo is technically there, except for some tiny mistakes, but (again) terribly impatient and short of charm and articulation. I know you are a busy person but really, you should take your time to enjoy the music.