troglodyte wrote:
Beautifully played! It also lifted the clouds for me - it is very coherent and meaningful. Particularly the phrasing and the RH runs are very well done and the balance between hands perfect, bringing out the singing melodies.
You already got extensive criticism so I cannot add much. For what it is worth I think the 2nd mov tempo is fine, and that if you want to put more effort on this you might consider upping the tempo of 1st and 3rd a little bit - though not at the price of losing your fine control. The thing that bugged me the most were the rhythmic disruptions in the 1st where you seem to hesitate before the main beat, as already pointed out.
(And yes, in Sweden "hacking" is a noble pursuit, producing beautiful things through a non rule based procedure. I do it all the time...)
Thank you! I'm not taking lessons currently so nobody instructed me about that main beat thing. I can probably edit out the hesitation. Unless that would be cheating too much? Hmmm....