I accept the holding bow criticism and the too loud dynamic but I must disagree with you about the legato from 2 - 3. I see only phrasing marks bracketing meas. 1 - 2 and 3 - 4 (at least for the right hand).
I think, we may have different editions, I used one from imslp.org. (Sometimes I do that, though I have the score, but I´m just too lazy to go downstairs to take it out of the shelf.
I have dreams of one day playing the set through perfect. I know this will take me a while.
That´s a good aim. I have the dream of completing WTC II one nice day (after having completed WTC I), and this also will take me while, I´m quite sure.
Let me know in pm when you have sent the score. I am planning on reserving a bigger piano for the time after I have learned your pieces to record them
That´s very kind of you. I will set a download-link today (first I have to scan the score) and send you the link in a pm.
Thank you, Riley, and best regards!