I had a listen to your recording, I liked your phrasing of the melodic line, and the range in dynamics applied. This piece does not sound familiar, but it sounds nice. Since I don't know the piece I of course don't have the score on hand, but I will say, at 2:14 the sudden forte caught me off guard, there seemed to be little forewarning
Thanks Riley. There is a short crescendo molto leading up to that, so I don't think it should come as a complete surprise. I resisted the temptation to start working up to that point much earlier, as Godowsky specifies not to.
For criticism I would have liked to hear more energy in the some of the repeats, besides that it was not painful to listen to, I enjoyed it.
Not painful, hehe, that is good
I'm all for energetic playing but this is a very relaxed and soothing piece and I like it to sound rather dreamy.