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Postby KeenanReimerWatts » Sun Apr 17, 2011 6:46 am


So, is it achieved, so that a piece doesn't sound like 'patchwork'. I thought I'd post one of the pieces I wrote that I've been told is a bit patchy...any comments are welcome!!
The piece is called 'Poem'. It did come in sections, but I tried to make it sound like it flowed...the time signature changes very often throughout, which might be a reason. Anyways.

thanks for listening!
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Re: Continuity

Postby musical-md » Sun Apr 17, 2011 7:08 am

You already gave us this work on the thread where you presented the Nocturne. Chris mentioned a continuity issues in regard to your Nocturne, not your Poem (that I can tell). My comment for your Poem is on the other thread "Submission."
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Re: Continuity

Postby Perrotta » Tue May 03, 2011 3:05 pm

Surely not "patchy". It has its "interruptions", but they appear just as needed.

I'm not sure, but I sensed an "oriental" atmosphere by the end of the piece... is that so?

Loved the piece. It's a previleg for us to be able to hear the music which is being created in our time, when we can still talk to the composers. Let's not let it go.

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