haha i noticed that and deleted one myself...lol
I should never have told people they can edit/delete their own posts
Well that etude is a lot better for going at a sane tempo. Much clearer. The LH seems to lead a bit of a life of its own - interesting accents and articulation but perhaps a bit too pointillistic in places.
The prelude is good of course. Anybody can do that
And a Bach P+F just for me... What did I do to deserve that
Well done, no quibbles about the prelude (though I prefer to take the long trill twice as fast). It also corrected a reading mistake of mine in tha last couple of bars. Thatnks for that ! The fugue is good too, the fugue theme (mostly) clearly brought out. I find it a bit too fast and hectic though, it seems like halfway the second page you get decidedly impatient and a bit brusque. Gotta watch that Joe, patience is the greatest virtue in Bach. Also, the couple of ill-tuned notes start to really irritate here(seems like it's always the crucial notes that are off the most, don't they).
The Revolutionary has great potential. Especially the unisono parts are impressive. The whole is a bit too casual and lacking in drama. Some of the LH work seems a bit muddled in the middle section. When you can add more weigth and power, this will be great.