Well all the notes seem to be there, and not many mistakes that I could hear. So far, so good !
The sound quality is strange though. Rather recessed and seems to fade in and out sometimes. What equipment did you use ?
Most important, as an interpretation it still leaves much to be desired. There is little of the spring to be heard here, it rather plods along with cumbersome and inconsistent arpeggios, random hesitations and odd accents here and there. A piece like this should be light and elegant as a feather, and bounce along like an innocent little lamb (without a lamb's sudden funny runs and jumps, of course
My advice would be to try and get it more fluent, more cheerful, more consistent, and lighter, and don't overdo these arpeggios. Perhaps listen what other pianists make of it, if you did not do so already. But for sure, you can play this piece, and with a bit more work it may be good !