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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 10:22 pm 
I'm 17, I'm composing for fun, I fell in love with music 2 years ago.
That's a piece I want to show you. I composed it using only computer program (usually I compose using the piano, a pen or a pencil, a rubber and a notebook).
The program is playing this... I'm using Finale Notepad demo and I couldn't creat midi file, so I recorded it with my microphone.
I would be grateful if you comment on it.
P.S.: That's march of a small toy-soldier :D


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 10:38 pm 
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Czesc, bardzo ladny. Lubię kompozycję, ale wy możecie wyrabiać kompozycję dłuższy.

Translation (my very bad Polish):

Hello, very nice. I like the composition, but you could make the composition longer.

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Cute ! Nice catchy theme.
Not sure if it should be much longer - toy soldier's marches are usually short.
A bit more staccato would help to better create the image of this little fella prancing about.

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Hey, juufa, very nice Polish :D
Well, this composition is really short, but I like that :)
edzio: moze udaloby mi sie jakos podrzucic ci pelna wersje finala? [2004]


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Good lord... seems like the Polish mafia has invaded our site :roll: :lol:

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techneut wrote:
Good lord... seems like the Polish mafia has invaded our site :roll: :lol:


And the Dutch Tulip & Perennial Growers as laborers! :wink:

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Small is beautiful. I would leave it the way it is:) But that is my opinion, do as you wish.

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A cute, simple piece. Good for younger siblings or friends I suppose.


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