The first thing that strikes me is that you have an incredibly heave pedal foot. Much of the music, especially the Rondo, is thus lost in pedal soup. I don't remember your normal classical recordings being like this. Being your own composer does not imply you can keep your foot down all the way
As to the compositions, I find them mildly pleasing but rather bland. It's not clear where they want to go, the Rondo just stops dead in its tracks, I believe every piece should have a proper ending. Some of the harmonic turns seem a bit trite (I seem to write this same sentence about many homegrown compositions posted here
). But there are also nice ideas, I like some of the archaic modulations in the Victory. The victory becomes rather hollow in the end though, piling up ever bigger chords and ending on a silly little closing arpeggio. Not very convincing !
Alas I cannot tell you how to improve composing, only what I like or don't like, which is very personal.