It's appreciated that you make audio recordintg especially for PS now
Your first attempt is not bad indeed, as Olaf says. But IMO, this is flawed in too many ways. It is clear (particularly from your Folia footage) that you are a capable pianist but it seems to me like too little preparation and polishing has gone into this recording.
Your performance of this gentle nostalgic waltz is very rushed and impatient. Generally, your touch is firm and your playing assured, but there is too little dynamic contrast and too little attention to phrasing and rubato. As a rule, impatience kills expression... There's a number of slips and some missing/inaudible notes but these are not really disturbing. However you should have taken care of the following more serius issues :
- The strange moments at 0:09 and 4:17 where you seem to hesitate and apparently decide to leave out the RH altogether in favour of a heavy LH accent.
- The very audible page turns at 0:47 and 2:35.
- The unfortunate fumble at 3:22.
I think you also use way too much pedal, in places things get really blurred. The piano could do with a tuning, the sound is not really bad but not real pleasant either.
Chopin deserves better.... and with a bit more patience and careful preparation, I am sure you can do much better than this !