Well, I think if I just take out a couple of my played notes, then it will be fine. Regarding the last 16th note...do you mean in the 14th bar from the end?
There is only last 16th note on that page
If that is in bar 14 from the end, so be it.
But that brings me to a question: How do you know it's a 'reading' error, and not just a slip?
Because it does not actually sound wrong, and because you do not allow slips.
I heard some slips in your version too. Maybe they are 'reading' errors? Do you want to know where they are?
Only if they're reading errors. All the slips I know where they are
But I'll redo mine anyway, and make sure I listen to some pro recordings to weedle out the read errors. Anybody plays any note different than I do, I hear that right away. It's a curse.